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I was bored so i thought id try my hand writing a JP4 treatment. Please leave comments what you think
Jurassic Park 4
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The story begins in 1993 - it has been 30 hours since the inccident on Site A, iGen sends in a tactical strike force known as (K9 Unit) onto the island to retrieve Nedry's DNA canister which has only 3 hours left of cooling. The are succesful in finding the storage device however are attacked by Dilophosaurus's & Procompsognathus that were roaming free, they manage to escape accept for the teams captain "Wolf" who is blinded by a Dilophosaurus and eaten by Procompsognathus. The Canister is then sent to an iGen testing facility on Site C.
One year later after the events of site b, iGen boardmembers elect a new CEO who is only refered as "The Director" - who aims to shut down the Jurassic Park project by initiates the Rx Virus across Site A, B & C - The virus would slowly stop the production of any new dinosaurces being birthed and slowly posioning the remaining dinosaurces on the 3 island.
2001 - Because of the events that occured on site B in 2001, two pterodactyl find there way to site C but crash into a power grid knocking out all the power on the island and locking in the staff, site c is then unable to make contact with iGen who believe the island had been cleared of iGen Employee's. Site C was the research facility that perfected the cloning sequence and also delt with other research in the field. Before lockdown in 2001 Site C was researching the deaths of several dinosaurces suffering from Rx. Site C was basically a giant laboratory with many corridors and research facilities where some dinosaurces were kept for research during lockdown the dinosuarces were released killing most of the staff. One of the surviving Doctors manages to send a message via a remote terminal in the facility before it was destroyed, Detailing what had happend... The information was intercepted by iGen who decides to cover this up hoping there demise and the Rx will tie up alot of lose ends.
2010 - iGen is brought out by BioSyn - a research company for medical diseases owned by George Hammond, who is John Hammond's succesful nephew. George knew about Jurassic Park with all three sites when iGen came up for sale George decided to buy the corporation to re-aquire the three sites for his uncle John. To which he wants to keep the island secure so they dinosaurces can roam free. However George discovers the message that was sent from Site C, and discusses it with John.
With the request of John, George assembles a team of specialists to go to site C and pick up on the research left about Rx... this includes Dr.Gerald Tannor a viral specialist, Dr.Tom Lucas former employee of Site A, Dr. Ellie Slator and Dr.Ian Malcolm survivours of site a and background knowledge in science and chaos mathmatics could be an asset. Ellie agree's to visit however Ian has reservations... But George manages to pursway him by stating that there are no dinosaurces on site C and it is purely a fact finding mission.
Elsewhere, Tim Murphy now aged 26 has spent the last 8 years in university studying business as he graduates. His friends decides to throw him a leaving party as he is about to join his second cousins Biosyn company. The Party "All from high society backgrounds" kidnap Tim and take him on a boat journey to a mystery location for his beech party. Upon arrival he discovers he has returned to Site A. It is not long before the some of the party get eaten and run for there lives.
Former iGen employee "The Director" - discovers that BioSyn is sending a team to Site C to discover the research they were working on. With iGen about to be exposed "The Director" sends the k9 unit back to the island to irradicate any evidence of there involvement.
Hammonds group at site C discover a sedicated baby T-rex which is dying in one of the research facilities, They are soon introduced to The Doctor who is watching over them from the otherside of a glass pannelled secure room. The Doctor has been living on the island for the past 9 years trying to research what went wrong. He explains that site C is a labrynth of corridors, rooms, tunnels and stairs built for the purpose of keeping people in the facility. Including escaped species... We learn that there is four employee's left on site C, Theres the Doctor - the only surviving genetisit, Payton his hermit like assistant who keeps getting lost within the facility. Isebella Logan who was the former iGen Representive stuck on the island during the lockdown and then there is a game hunter McCreedy who was locked out but travels between the three sites..(Island) to delieve dying species of dinosaurce who are dying of Rx. The group then work with The Doctor to overlook his 9 year research which had been limited due to the lack of power.
McCreedy is on site A - and discovers Tim and a few of his friends who had survived, McCreedy is unhappy to see them but desides to take them to The Doctor on site C.
Back on site C, Dr.Lucas is able to restore power to the facility to which Isebella who locked herself in the control room has visability of the entire island via cameras scattered all over the island. The Doctor reveals the full extent of his research...
Many years ago when Hammond was working on the ability to clone a dinosauce they used frog DNA to help fill in a few missing parts left by the blood they were able to get from the mosquito. However this caused the first batch of dinosauces to be mutated... differences occured in colour and size... even having some herbivors become carnivours an vice versa... each dinosauce was encoded with a Rx safty virus which if activated would wipe out the entire species by causing them to become steril and starts to shut down all there nerve systems. The race is on to try and save the dinosauces. However The K9 unit arrive on Site C heavily armed, They break into the facility and make there way to the main control, Isebella trapped in the main control room remembers what the team does and knows they are here to irradicate evidence. She warns via intercom The Doctor and hammonds group to escape whilst you can. Which is heard by K9 as they make there way to the main control room. Isabella knowing her time is up unleases all the captive dinosauces in the facility which make there way towards the main control room where the K9 unit is. Isabella is killed by a group of Procompsognathus
Payton the doctors assistant manages to find an escape route and leads The Doctor and Hammonds team out of the facility however Dr.Tannor one of hammonds team is killed by an oversized Raptor. a couple of the k9 unit is also killed but the survivours manage to escape the facility and make chase after Hammonds group.
During there escape, the group meeet up with McCreedy and Tim's Party. Surpised to find them on the island. Payton had discovered that iGen has sent in a fleet of soldiers to irradicate the evidence that these islands existed. Knowing that Site C was lost the group would have better survival rate to make contact with the outside world on site B, The group take McCreedy's raft over to site b where they make there way towards "THE VAULT" a secure medicle facility north of the island. on there journey there McCreedy is eaten by a T-Rex. during its chase and Payton is ripped in two by two spinosauces. The k9 unit also find themselves on site b chasing Hammonds group. there unit is down to four survivours and slowly one by one are being killed off. Whilst in the Vault Hammonds group discover the Nerdy Canister, to which the key to the Rx virus originate, using the raw DNA from the canister The Doctor is able to make a cure which is leaked into the water systems that goes directly into seven lakes that runs across the island. the group then become face to face with a t-rex however George sacrifes himself to save the group, the group on the run encounting "Fox" the only surviving member of the k9 unit, his concous ways heavy and wanting revenge for his team mates he takes on the T-Rex that is heading there way. He manges to kill it saving the Hammond group but is then bit in two by two other t-rex's on the island. On the hammond group are now running scared with no where to go. They soon see a helicopter fly overhead with the BioSyn logo, it lands at the communication centre and the group are rescued by a second unit sent by John Hammond after learning what happend to Tim. The group is rescued and return back to the main land.
Ian and Ellie state they will never again have nothing more to do with the island, Tim becomes the new director of BioSyn goes to sue the former members of iGen who state they have no idea of The Directors actions or wereabouts.
6 months later, we locate The Director who is traveling to a remote facility on the mainland - There we see him meet The Doctor, who reveals that the new Dinosauce clones are ready to be processed. To which we focus on the canister... Which is when we learn the Ultimate goal of iGen was to obtain Dinosauce DNA so they are able to emulate there own creatures... The Doctor and The Director was working together all along...
Leading to a possible Jurassic Park 5...
Jurassic Park 4
---------------
The story begins in 1993 - it has been 30 hours since the inccident on Site A, iGen sends in a tactical strike force known as (K9 Unit) onto the island to retrieve Nedry's DNA canister which has only 3 hours left of cooling. The are succesful in finding the storage device however are attacked by Dilophosaurus's & Procompsognathus that were roaming free, they manage to escape accept for the teams captain "Wolf" who is blinded by a Dilophosaurus and eaten by Procompsognathus. The Canister is then sent to an iGen testing facility on Site C.
One year later after the events of site b, iGen boardmembers elect a new CEO who is only refered as "The Director" - who aims to shut down the Jurassic Park project by initiates the Rx Virus across Site A, B & C - The virus would slowly stop the production of any new dinosaurces being birthed and slowly posioning the remaining dinosaurces on the 3 island.
2001 - Because of the events that occured on site B in 2001, two pterodactyl find there way to site C but crash into a power grid knocking out all the power on the island and locking in the staff, site c is then unable to make contact with iGen who believe the island had been cleared of iGen Employee's. Site C was the research facility that perfected the cloning sequence and also delt with other research in the field. Before lockdown in 2001 Site C was researching the deaths of several dinosaurces suffering from Rx. Site C was basically a giant laboratory with many corridors and research facilities where some dinosaurces were kept for research during lockdown the dinosuarces were released killing most of the staff. One of the surviving Doctors manages to send a message via a remote terminal in the facility before it was destroyed, Detailing what had happend... The information was intercepted by iGen who decides to cover this up hoping there demise and the Rx will tie up alot of lose ends.
2010 - iGen is brought out by BioSyn - a research company for medical diseases owned by George Hammond, who is John Hammond's succesful nephew. George knew about Jurassic Park with all three sites when iGen came up for sale George decided to buy the corporation to re-aquire the three sites for his uncle John. To which he wants to keep the island secure so they dinosaurces can roam free. However George discovers the message that was sent from Site C, and discusses it with John.
With the request of John, George assembles a team of specialists to go to site C and pick up on the research left about Rx... this includes Dr.Gerald Tannor a viral specialist, Dr.Tom Lucas former employee of Site A, Dr. Ellie Slator and Dr.Ian Malcolm survivours of site a and background knowledge in science and chaos mathmatics could be an asset. Ellie agree's to visit however Ian has reservations... But George manages to pursway him by stating that there are no dinosaurces on site C and it is purely a fact finding mission.
Elsewhere, Tim Murphy now aged 26 has spent the last 8 years in university studying business as he graduates. His friends decides to throw him a leaving party as he is about to join his second cousins Biosyn company. The Party "All from high society backgrounds" kidnap Tim and take him on a boat journey to a mystery location for his beech party. Upon arrival he discovers he has returned to Site A. It is not long before the some of the party get eaten and run for there lives.
Former iGen employee "The Director" - discovers that BioSyn is sending a team to Site C to discover the research they were working on. With iGen about to be exposed "The Director" sends the k9 unit back to the island to irradicate any evidence of there involvement.
Hammonds group at site C discover a sedicated baby T-rex which is dying in one of the research facilities, They are soon introduced to The Doctor who is watching over them from the otherside of a glass pannelled secure room. The Doctor has been living on the island for the past 9 years trying to research what went wrong. He explains that site C is a labrynth of corridors, rooms, tunnels and stairs built for the purpose of keeping people in the facility. Including escaped species... We learn that there is four employee's left on site C, Theres the Doctor - the only surviving genetisit, Payton his hermit like assistant who keeps getting lost within the facility. Isebella Logan who was the former iGen Representive stuck on the island during the lockdown and then there is a game hunter McCreedy who was locked out but travels between the three sites..(Island) to delieve dying species of dinosaurce who are dying of Rx. The group then work with The Doctor to overlook his 9 year research which had been limited due to the lack of power.
McCreedy is on site A - and discovers Tim and a few of his friends who had survived, McCreedy is unhappy to see them but desides to take them to The Doctor on site C.
Back on site C, Dr.Lucas is able to restore power to the facility to which Isebella who locked herself in the control room has visability of the entire island via cameras scattered all over the island. The Doctor reveals the full extent of his research...
Many years ago when Hammond was working on the ability to clone a dinosauce they used frog DNA to help fill in a few missing parts left by the blood they were able to get from the mosquito. However this caused the first batch of dinosauces to be mutated... differences occured in colour and size... even having some herbivors become carnivours an vice versa... each dinosauce was encoded with a Rx safty virus which if activated would wipe out the entire species by causing them to become steril and starts to shut down all there nerve systems. The race is on to try and save the dinosauces. However The K9 unit arrive on Site C heavily armed, They break into the facility and make there way to the main control, Isebella trapped in the main control room remembers what the team does and knows they are here to irradicate evidence. She warns via intercom The Doctor and hammonds group to escape whilst you can. Which is heard by K9 as they make there way to the main control room. Isabella knowing her time is up unleases all the captive dinosauces in the facility which make there way towards the main control room where the K9 unit is. Isabella is killed by a group of Procompsognathus
Payton the doctors assistant manages to find an escape route and leads The Doctor and Hammonds team out of the facility however Dr.Tannor one of hammonds team is killed by an oversized Raptor. a couple of the k9 unit is also killed but the survivours manage to escape the facility and make chase after Hammonds group.
During there escape, the group meeet up with McCreedy and Tim's Party. Surpised to find them on the island. Payton had discovered that iGen has sent in a fleet of soldiers to irradicate the evidence that these islands existed. Knowing that Site C was lost the group would have better survival rate to make contact with the outside world on site B, The group take McCreedy's raft over to site b where they make there way towards "THE VAULT" a secure medicle facility north of the island. on there journey there McCreedy is eaten by a T-Rex. during its chase and Payton is ripped in two by two spinosauces. The k9 unit also find themselves on site b chasing Hammonds group. there unit is down to four survivours and slowly one by one are being killed off. Whilst in the Vault Hammonds group discover the Nerdy Canister, to which the key to the Rx virus originate, using the raw DNA from the canister The Doctor is able to make a cure which is leaked into the water systems that goes directly into seven lakes that runs across the island. the group then become face to face with a t-rex however George sacrifes himself to save the group, the group on the run encounting "Fox" the only surviving member of the k9 unit, his concous ways heavy and wanting revenge for his team mates he takes on the T-Rex that is heading there way. He manges to kill it saving the Hammond group but is then bit in two by two other t-rex's on the island. On the hammond group are now running scared with no where to go. They soon see a helicopter fly overhead with the BioSyn logo, it lands at the communication centre and the group are rescued by a second unit sent by John Hammond after learning what happend to Tim. The group is rescued and return back to the main land.
Ian and Ellie state they will never again have nothing more to do with the island, Tim becomes the new director of BioSyn goes to sue the former members of iGen who state they have no idea of The Directors actions or wereabouts.
6 months later, we locate The Director who is traveling to a remote facility on the mainland - There we see him meet The Doctor, who reveals that the new Dinosauce clones are ready to be processed. To which we focus on the canister... Which is when we learn the Ultimate goal of iGen was to obtain Dinosauce DNA so they are able to emulate there own creatures... The Doctor and The Director was working together all along...
Leading to a possible Jurassic Park 5...
