Spiderman VS Superman

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heres my fanfic so far:

Its nightime, midnight. A mighty thunderstorm rages above, lighting and an crackle of thunder explodes from the Heavens every few seconds. The clouds are an dark blue and gray color, the moon gone. The sound of thunder vibrares through Spiderman, messing with his senses. Spiderman is crouched down at the very top of the empire state building, looking at the approaching Venom, climbing the walls at blazeing speed towards Spiderman. The citys light has been completely knocked out....Spiderman is wearing an all black suit, which make his grayish/sickly white eyes stand out. The only sound from all the way up here is thunder, and the constantly coming thick drops of ice cold rain, pounding against his body. "Why Venom...why kill her...I loved her... I never can return the favor...shes dead now...because of you and..." whispered Spiderman, his eyes flooded with tears behind the skin tight mask. Venom, was climbing towards Spiderman, almost near him. He was growling and roaring like an lion, enraged by the wounds Spiderman had given him. Finally, Venom was only merely 200-100 feet below Spiderman. Now it was time. Revenge. An titanic sized lighting riped itself from the sky, and zig zaged its way through the air towards where Spiderman was. He knew it was coming before it even came out of the sky. Spiderman screamed, as he did an front flip, and dived downwards, the lighting bolt hiting where he just stood merely seconds ago with an loud crash. Soaring head first downwards, his stomach leaped forward, moving his body slightly here and there so he wouldn`t collide with the walls of the empire state building. He was falling so fast the rain became an blur. Venom stoped clmibing, stareing up at Spiderman, his hands and feet were dung deep into the concrete walls. Spiderman, geting close to Venom, arms in front of him, shot weblines at Venoms chest. Venom jumped far, backwards, off the side of the empire state building, in an attempt to dodge the 2 web lines, but failed, for the thick, web lines struck him in his chest. Spiderman pulled harder on the web lines, his falling speed increased, Venom only a few feet away now. Venom, from the web lines was pulled up a few feet. venom screamed out in rage, did a back flip (still falling) and shot his arms towards Spiderman. His arms by the time they reached Spiderman was like an bizarre huge ball of alive blue thick goo. It engulfed Spiderman completely, moving to fast for even his 6th sense to stop. Venom retracted his arms, pulling Spiderman in. They both collided with each other so hard, they made a small shock wave, that kncoked away the rain around them for an brief moment. Then, they started falling down the side of the empire state building towards the darkened city, fighting...fighting an fight that would be there last...

Chapter 1
Sandman

With an sharp gasp of cool air, Peter Parker wakes up in his apartment. With his shirt off, he sits up, and lays sidways on his left, yawning. The window from the left side of the white blanketed bed is having luke warm sunlight pour through it. It shines on Peter and her. Mary Jane Watson, who is sleeping on her stomach besides him, her head facing him. She is in an baggy long sleeved shirt of Peters. Peter stares at her happily, and chuckles at this. MJ awakes from this, opens her eyes slowly, looks at him, and smiles. "What are you looking at?" asks MJ. "You obviously." saids Peter as MJ sits up slowly, her eyes puffy from sleep. she sits indian style, the thick creamy white blanket around her waist, her red hair flowing down to her shoulders. "Why?" asks MJ, with an small grin. "Cause I love you. I love you Mary Jane Watson." sads Peter, smileing. MJ smiles wide, showing her perfect white teeth. "Ok, Ok, you didn`t have to go that far, but correct answer." saids MJ with an soft laugh, as she leans in and kisses Peter for an long and lingering moment. Then she pulls back and sighs. "Well, it all goes down today. I`ve been praticeing for months, the set is the biggest we`ve used yet. And the storys great. Its about A man who gets an girl hes been wanting all his life. Sounds familar." saids MJ. "Yeah, no kidding. Manhattan Memories is the name of the play right?" asked Peter, MJ nods her head. "Nervous?" asks Peter. "Yeah, but am ready. Be there to cheer me on though. You know from the past how I get when you don`t show up." said MJ with an playful/serious expression. Peter, laughed, and tryed to sit up more, but winced greatly in pain. He laid back down. "Oh god Peter, are you alright?" asked MJ, a look of heavy concern on her face. "Yeah, just that bank robber guy, got me good...6th sense wasn`t all there in time...don`t worry, am Spiderman remember? I`ll heal." said Peter tryin to smile, the pain in his ribs throbing was sharp. "How could I forget who you really are?" asked MJ with an hardened expression. "Are you ok?" asked Peter. "Yeah, I just get worried about you, its so dangerous what you do." said MJ. "What I must do." corrected Peter flatly. Silence, MJ looking down for a moment. She did not agree.

Later that afternoon, the play, "Manhattan Memories", directed by Wing Hay Lam, has an half an hour left before its done. Peter sits in the giant theater room, packed with hundreds of people dressed in fancy clothes (besides Peters cheap suit he bought an block away from this theater). The seats are red, arms, floor, black, walls red. Besides peoples heads, and the actors on stage, nothing else could be made out, the lights, except on stage obviously, have been turned off. MJ was on stage, in an all white, long dress. Her hair was pulled back, and up in an eleborate way that made her look stunning. The set was entirely black despite big stars on the walls in the back and an glittering white spiral staircase, the only actors on set was MJ and some guy buff in an light blue suit. The two characters were in love, but were falling apart...

Meanwhile, a couple blocks away on this sunny New York day, an big, bulky black armored car in driving at full speed down the street. Any car in the way is riped apart when struck, the cars are completely totaled. Multiple police cars are right on its tail. Soon, the building where "Manhattan Memories" is, just where the armored car stops with a loud screech of metal and rubber, smoke coming from underneath. The street is wide, and the sidewalks are lined with cars, cars are constantly coming by. An fat, bearded man jumps head first out of the armored car and takes off running down the street. Police cars, 7 of them, surround the armored car, cars 100 feet from the armored car. The armored car starts rocking back and forth, from side to side, moving violently. The inside up the car is being dented up badly, somone is literally puncheing through this powerfully strong car, screaming...suddenly, from the top of the armored car, bursts an tall, muscular, short haired man wearing an dark striped green/black shirt and dark taned pants. His body rips through the top of the armored car, and lands quickly and powerfully next to its side. (armored car in the middle of the street). The man walks forward a little bit, then stops, and looks around at the police cars to the right of him. The cops in the police cars get out, and point there guns at the man...The Sandman. "Put your hands where I can see them, or we will fire!" yelled an cop. "Sure, hows here?" asks the Sandman, as he faces the cops, and lunges his right arm forth towards the police cars. His right arm explodes into an 7 feet wide arm made of constantly swirling/moving, golden, light brown sand. The arm of sand extends rapidly towards the police cars. "LOOK OUT!" yells an cop, as the arms fist plows through the front of an cop car, the whole front of the car bents inwards, then the car explodes loudly. then the other cop cars next to it explodes. Regualr cars passing by are caught by the explosion, or crash into each other or come to an quick stop, then as fast as possible turn around. People on the sidewalks start running away, and screaming. The Sandman retracts his arm, and his arm goes back to human/normal form. Where the 7 cop cars were, is now an colassal sized firestorm, and bent metal. Whereever there was sand, the sand evaporated quickly. The Sandman, enjoying himself, looked around, upwards at the buildings around him. Then, he raised both arms, and slamed his hands together, and sent out an powerful shockwave. Every window around him in multiple buildings exploded inwards, shattering loudly, knocking away people who were by the windows like they were made of paper.

Meanwhile, the explosions, and other screaming from the street, stoped the play. As people in the theater started hearing them, they grew into an intense panic. Minutes later, the whole theater of people began running out. There was no mere accident outside, there were explosions! Something was very wrong, Peter knew it. His spidey sense was goin off so bad, he felt sick. "Oh boy..." Peter whispered to himself. Peter stood up, and looked at MJ... who was the only one on stage now, looking at Peter, scared, Then, it was as though time stoped...and Peter couldn`t hear. Peter and MJ stared at each other, despite the screaming and running people. "Go." said MJ with her lips. "I love you." says Peter with his lips. MJ nods, and with her lips repeats "Go". Peter nods, and starts running out of the theater, riping apart his shirt to quickly reveal his costume underneath, for no one around him is paying attention.
Sandman stood in the middle of the street, looking at falling glass raining around him. No more cars were running in this direction anymore, so this part of the street was empty. People from Manhatton Memories were running around him, screaming there heads off. He giggled, amused. Then his right ear twitched suddenly, and he looked down at the ground. He heard an strange sound...like something cuting through the air. Sandman walked forward a few feet from the armored car, the crowd from MJ`s play gone now, all far away, screaming like little girls in the distance. Sandman looked up in front of him, and saw an man in an bizarre red/blue costume, crouched down on the side of an building, stareing at Sandman, his feet seemly were glued to the wall...it was Spiderman.
"Hey big fella! Haven`t seen someone your size in an while, I was hopeing we could you know...talk..." said spiderman, as he looked around at the destruction, and people sreaming in the distance to the right and left of him. "about something...." spiderman finished, looking back down at sandman who was a good 200 feet away from him. "Sure, lets...have some words shall we?" asked Sandman with an evil smile, glareing at spiderman. Spiderman screamed as he shot 2 web lines at sandmans chest, who stood there as if nothing could hurt him. Spiderman pulled on his web lines useing both hands, and his body was instantly pulled through the air towards sandman at great speed, his body spiraling through the air like an football. When spiderman got within the correct amount of feet in front of sandman (still flying through the air) spiderman did an high speed front flip, and collided with sandmans chest, feet first. But then, when spiderman crashed into him, he simply when through him, like going through moist butter, and his body crashed violently into the side of the armored car head first, going through its side, and bursting out of the other end, spidermans body smacked against the concrete, and rolled at an stop before the 2 front doors of Manhatton Memories.
The spot where spiderman went through sandmans body, his chest, was now nothing more than an jagged, sandy hole, that healed rapidly, leaveing an large rip his shirt. Now it was if nothing had happened to the sandman. Seconds later, spiderman did an werid cartwheel over the armored car, and landed a few feet in front of the sandman. He ran towards the sandman, and did an back flip, both of his feet smashing into the bottom of the sandmans lower jaw. Sandmans head snaped upwards from the impact. Spiderman, still in midair from backflip, came back down, feet first, both feet crashing into his sandmans face. Then spiderman quickly w****d his legs around the sandmans head, and he gave 7 hard punches to the top of his head/face. Then he bounced back off him, and landed in front of sandman, facing him. Spiderman spun around, and his right foot connected with the right side of sandmans face. Then, spiderman, with his right hand, punched sandman hard in the left side of his face. Then spiderman steped back. Sandman was completely unharmed, just stareing at spiderman. Then spiderman walked up to the sandman, and kicked him in the nuts. Nothing. Spiderman stood back. "Good lord what are you?" asked spiderman out of breathe. Then out of no where, sandman kicked spiderman in the chest with his right foot. Spiderman flew back far, and collided with the ground hard, landing on his stomach. He landed in the middle of the street, far in front of the sandman. An look of utter surprise engulfed Sandman, as spiderman stood up slowly. Apprantenly Spiderman was stronger than he first thought. Limping towards Sandman, Spiderman shook off the pain. "How you...you are surpriseing." said Sandman. "Got me real good there, my turn though." said spiderman. "I think not." said sandman, as he aimed his left arm at spiderman. His arm exploded, and became an 10 feet wide arm of swirling, constantly moving sand. The arm of sand balled its hand into an fist just as wide as the arm , and shot its towards spiderman. Spidermans 6th sense tapped in, and time slowed, he was righty to dodge the fist. But as soon as the coming arm of sand got close enough, the fist exploded into 4 identical like fists, moving in an slow clockwise motion. This messed with spidermans 6th sense greatly, and went to fast towards him for his 6th sense to react. Spiderman shielded his face and chest by crossing his arms, making an "X" in front of him with his arms.

The 4 fists of sand connected with spidermans body. Pain surged throughout Spiderman, as he was lifted off the ground about 13 feet up into the air, and was now flying backwards through the air at about 70 mph. Spiderman flew backwards so long, he reached an street with heavy traffic. Spiderman screamed as his back collided with the wind shield of an big light blue truck. Spidermans body literally tore through the entire right side of the truck. Debris from the truck flying everywhere, spidermans light body smacked/bounced/and rolled against the street like an bouncey ball before coming to an skidding stop on his back. An dense amount of cars around him quickly drove around him, honking there horns. People on the sidewalks pointed and stared in amazement. Breatheing deeply, and quickly, spiderman slowly stood up, his 6th sense would tell him if he were about to get hit by an car as they flew around past him. Dizzy, the world spinning, he looked forward, far forward at where the sandman was. He was standing in the same spot, stareing right back at spiderman, smileing. Furious, spiderman jumped high upwards, and shot web lines at buildings out in front, and started swinging on multiple web lines towards sandman, pain messing with him deeply. Spiderman jumped through the air an minute later, and collided softly, on all fours with the side of an building faceing downwards, stomach to the building, looking down at sandman. It was the closest building to him. "You want more eh? Try this!" yelled Sandman, as he turned around, and picked up the armored car, faced spiderman, and with an cry of strain, he threw the armored car at spiderman. "Oh boy..." thought spiderman, the armored car sailing through the air, going so fast, it tore at the air around it. Spiderman did multiple back flips at lighting speed, dodgeing windows. He did so many back flips, so fast, that the armored car missed him, riping through the part of the outside of the building he had just been.

Be then suddenly, an 300 feet crater came to life from the impact of the armored car hiting the building. Concrete gave in, and before spiderman could think, he was falling, backwards, into the building, almost the whole front of the tall building caveing in. The world around he was blured, and the air cluttered with debris that squeezed at his body. Then spidermans back and head connected harshly with the floor. There were people in this building, spiderman could hear them running away, screaming. Laying on his back, before him was an huge hole in the face of the building. The floor spiderman was on was completely destoryed, bits of wood and brick and metal etc. were every where. In the center of the room, was an huge hole, the hole where the armored car went through...suddenly, spiderman felt his spider sense kicking in. After an lingering hesitation, he jumped to his feet, his head spining. He looked forward, and was to weak to dodge an huge, dense, long cloud of roaring sand that went through him, engulfing, him, taking him off his feet, spiderman flying backwards through the air. Then, on the other side of the building, the cloud exploded through, leaveing behind another giant crater, every window in the building shattering, debris raining on the streets below. The long cloud of sand snaked its way upwards towards the top of an tall building, spiderman tumbleing end over end inside the cloud of sand. The cloud of sand blew right through the top of the building, spiderman at the head of the cloud, felt the full impact. The top of the building blown away, the cloud zig zaged towards the street below, and released spiderman, leting him fall hundreds of feet before crashing violently and loudly with the top of an red car. Traffic began speeding away at the sight of this, and the cloud above. As the people in the red car stoped the car, and got out, and ran away, spidermans body rolled off the top of the car, and hit the ground with an thud, he gave an weak sigh of exaustion as he landed on his stomach. Suddenly, an fire truck, guy driving the truck not paying attention at first, sees the red car spiderman crashed into, spiderman laying on his stomach on the ground next to red cars left side. The fire truck came an screeching stop a few feet behind it, stoping so suddenly, that the fire truck was turned sideways. Meanwhile the swirling cloud of sand above, turned into an "tornado" and spiraled its way towards the ground. The cloud shrunk, and slowly took on the form of an human, till finally after an minute, the human looking sandman was back, walking towards spiderman, walking through the middle of the street, a few feet away in front of spiderman. Any car that got in his way was punched/kicked away, or simply picked of and thrown away. Spiderman stood up. His costume was riped badly, he was bleeding, was cut, and bruised, and limping. Then he turned around, looked at the fire truck, then at sandman...one thing could stop him that made perfect sense...water!
 

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