sound very promising...Could you do better? Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm yes i could first of i wouldnt add the darn kid thats a big no, second i would show the powerful bond that Clark has with his parents and in the case of Returns Martha Kent. The Suit would be brighter as well as a bigger built Superman. Also Kryptonite would have its lasting effect and not just when a scene calls for it. Superman would well act like Superman (which means no flying all the way to an ex house and then proceeding to not only spy on her but listen to a private conversation between a man and his woman). More action for example a good scene a terrorist is holding a building hostage and then detonates a bomb but as the bomb sets of Superman flys so fast grabs the F.B.I agents that were close to the terrorist and blows on the bomb freezing it before the explosion consumes the building. The film would also be brighter and i would give the audience an in dept look at just what the big deal is about metropolis (the city of the future). Also the world would truly show resentment towards Superman for leaving them for 5 years and not just accept him back the moment he lands i would have him earn his right back into the peoples hearths. Another good thing would be to have a touching scene with Lois it would go something like this. Superman: I am sorry i left Lois i didnt, couldnt tell you i was leaving I wasnt sure if i would even make the journey or if the ship was strong enough.
Lois: So you left me.. us for a journey you werent even sure you would survive.
Superman: Yes
Lois looks at him shocked and surprised
Lois: Why
Superman: When i heard scientist claim they had located Krypton i had to see if there were any survivors or if they needed help.
Lois: Where there
Superman Turns around jaws clench(the way Welling does eyes stare into the distance)
Superman: The place was a graveyard there was no one there but the vastness of empty space.
Lois approaches him about to place her hands on his broad shoulders then hesitates
Lois: I . am sorry
Superman Smiles his face returning to the warmth he always reflexes.
Superman: Its ok Lois i may have been born on krypton but earth is my home.
And well you guys get the idea.
Anyway there would be tons more action and at the end i would have Braniacs ship heading to earth but it wouldnt be seeing clearly just as a shooting star just after supes does his fly by.
too bad... we were getting a limited vision director who only have these two ideas... 1. son and the father 2. let's kick the hell of superman in the movie.
