Swordmaster
Big Damn Hero
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Yes he did
When and where?Swordmaster said:Yes he did
Swordmaster said:It all depends on the way they were raised, actually. Edge was raised and trained by a man who wants to help, but due to his old age, cannot, so he trains someone else, someone gifted, to help him. DarkCat wants to use her powers for good, again, because of the way she was raised. KnightBat wants revenge for his parents assassination. Bella's origin is complex, and one I have yet to work out
Dark Phantom said:See that's what I like to hear. This is what what you need to make stand out in your origins. Some of yours were good like Edge and KnightBat. However, In DarkCat's origin it's only mentioned why she chose to be a hero. It's not enough. You need to make that specific part more definitive.
I hope I'm not being to pushy, just giving words of advice
rigel7soldiers said:Eh... why the hell not.
Could you at least mention me a few times? Jes' wonderin'...
Swordmaster said:Thanks dude
You read fast