Watchmen Abridged!

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FADE IN:

INT. JEFFREY DEAN MORGAN’S APARTMENT

JEFFREY DEAN MORGAN watches his television, which is broadcasting what appears to be a ****** SATURDAY NIGHT LIVE SKETCH featuring impersonations of PAT BUCHANAN, JOHN MCLAUGHLIN, and RICHARD NIXON IF HE WAS MADE ENTIRELY OF MAKEUP.

JEFFREY DEAN MORGAN
Gosh, things sure have been an alternate 1985 ever since superheroes helped win the Vietnam War and Nixon was re-elected three times!
Suddenly, a MYSTERIOUS FIGURE breaks into the apartment, pummels JEFFREY, and forces himself to not utter a single sound so as to not give his identity away, despite the fact that JEFFREY seems to know it.

JEFFREY DEAN MORGAN
Wait! Don’t kill me! I need to bleed onto my yellow smiley face button at an awkward angle so that the raging Watchmen fanbois in the audience are placated.
(bleeds)
Okay, ready.

RABID FANBOIS
Boo. The blood splatter is four degrees off.
The MYSTERIOUS FIGURE tosses JEFFREY out a window. This is done in SLOW MOTION, of course, because DIRECTOR ZACK SNYDER has the BRAIN OF A CHIMP.

JACKIE EARLE HALEY, wearing a mask made of AMAZON KINDLE ELECTRONIC INK, investigates JEFFREY’S APARTMENT and discovers he was the masked vigilante THE COMEDIAN.

JACKIE EARLE HALEY (V.O.)
(growling)
Jackie’s Journal: A comedian died tonight. And I’m not talking about a Carlos Mencia performance. Someone is going around killing masked heroes, and I’m going to find out who sometime within the next three excruciating hours. Hope everyone went to the bathroom already.

INT. UNDERGROUND LAIR

JACKIE meets up with PATRICK WILSON in his secret hideout.

JACKIE EARLE HALEY
(growling)
Patrick, someone is killing superheros, so you should watch your back.

PATRICK WILSON
Any particular reason you’re whispering as loudly as possible?

JACKIE EARLE HALEY
(growling)
I just finished watching The Dark Knight. This is how superheroes talk, isn’t it?

PATRICK WILSON
Fair enough. I pretty much stole my costume from that movie. Anyway, you don’t have to worry about the superhero killer coming after me. I haven’t worn my superhero costume since masked vigilantism was outlawed in the totally alternate 1970’s! Everything is so alternate here!

JACKIE EARLE HALEY
(growling)
I know! And New Coke was never released after Pepsi got the superhero endorsement!

PATRICK WILSON
Ohmigod so alternate!

JACKIE EARLE HALEY
(growling)
Not to mention how Microsoft skipped over Windows 1.0 and went straight to Windows ME!

PATRICK WILSON
My mind is blown, holy **** alternate reality!
INT. RESEARCH FACILITY

JACKIE breaks into a MILITARY RESEARCH FACILITY to meet with BILLY CRUDUP and MALIN AKERMAN.

JACKIE EARLE HALEY
(growling)
Hey. Nice to see you again, fellow superheroes.

MALIN AKERMAN
Fellow superheroes? The only one of us with any goddamn powers is Billy.

JACKIE EARLE HALEY
(growling)
That’s not true. My mask changes patterns randomly for some reason, that’s kind of like a power. And what about your power to still have a career after starring in The Heartbreak Kid?

BILLY CRUDUP
Enough chit-chat. I have very important work to do with this nuclear something-or-other. What do you want, Jackie?

JACKIE EARLE HALEY
(growling)
Honestly, there’s nothing in the world I want more than for you to drape something over that big blue glowing penis of yours.

BILLY CRUDUP
If only you could perceive my big blue penis in four dimensions, as I do.

JACKIE EARLE HALEY
(growling)
Yeah, that actually sounds like some kind of hell. Anyway, I came by to find out if you had any idea who was murdering Watchmen.
BILLY CRUDUP
Isn’t it obvious? Zack Snyder.
JACKIE leaves to go do some brooding elsewhere while MALIN visits her mother, CARLA GUGINO.

INT. CARLA GUGINO’S HOUSE

MALIN is teleported to her MOTHER’S HOUSE.

MALIN AKERMAN
Mom, I came here to tell you that Jeffery Dean Morgan is dead.

CARLA GUGINO
Mom? We’re like the same age. My “old person makeup” looks worse than Adam Sandler’s from Click. Are people buying this?

MALIN AKERMAN
Did you hear me? That ******* The Comedian is dead. The guy that raped you! That’s right, RAPED! In a comic book movie! Because the one thing missing from Spiderman was some ****ING RAPE.

CARLA GUGINO
He wasn’t so bad. He only raped me because it was such a simple way to establish that this comic book story is for adults.

MALIN AKERMAN
Mom, there’s no such thing as comics for adults. There are just comics for kids and comics for kids that they have to hide from their parents because they contain drawings of boobs.

Meanwhile, various SUPERHEROES attend the funeral of JEFFREY DEAN MORGAN and treat the audience to a handful of flashbacks including MATTHEW GOODE’s formation of the WATCHMEN, society’s revolt against vigilantism, and this one time in Vietnam where JEFFREY was replaced by ROBERT DOWNEY JR.

INT. RESEARCH FACILITY

Later, BILLY CRUDUP, BILLY CRUDUP, and BILLY CRUDUP are all having sex with MALIN AKERMAN. Suddenly, she stops him.

MALIN AKERMAN
What the… why are there three versions of you having sex with me?

BILLY CRUDUP
What? I thought you had a fantasy of being gangbanged by the Blue Man Group.

MALIN AKERMAN
Well, of course I do, but still… that was easily the third strangest group sex I’ve ever had.
MALIN notices another copy of BILLY working on his nuclear THINGAMAJIG.

MALIN AKERMAN
What the ****? You’re working in here too? Why did you even say you wanted to have sex if you would have rather worked?

BILLY CRUDUP
It’s not like that, Malin. I definitely needed to get laid. After all… I’ve got blue balls.

MALIN AKERMAN
…

BILLY CRUDUP
Hey-oooo!

MALIN AKERMAN
Ugh. I’m leaving you, Billy.

BILLY CRUDUP
Please don’t dump me, Malin. It would make me so… blue. Eh? Eh?
MALIN leaves to go see PATRICK WILSON. Upset, BILLY teleports himself to MARS and builds a GIGANTIC QUMRRLFPSKLZNT to WALK AROUND ON.

INT. UNDERGROUND LAIR

JACKIE EARLE HALEY returns to PATRICK WILSON’S LAIR.

JACKIE EARLE HALEY
(growling)
I think I’ve figured out who killed Jeffrey.

PATRICK WILSON
Oh? Let me guess. It would have to be one of the main superheroes to have any impact. He didn’t glow blue, he was too tall to be Malin, and it couldn’t have been either of us. Must be that *****ebag Matthew Goode. That was easy, did that take you the entire movie?

JACKIE EARLE HALEY
… God dammit. Jackie’s Journal: Patrick Wilson is a dick.
JACKIE and PATRICK fly to MATTHEW GOODE’S FORTRESS OF SMARMITUDE using a SHIP SHAPED LIKE E.T.’S HEAD.

INT. MATTHEW GOODE’S HIDEOUT

JACKIE and PATRICK enter MATTHEW’S HIDEOUT.

MATTHEW GOODE
Welcome to my fortress, fellow do-gooders!

JACKIE EARLE HALEY
(growling)
Cut the crap, Matthew. We know you killed Jeffrey Dean Morgan.

MATTHEW GOODE
But of course! Would you like me to explain why as I stroke my tigercatrabbit?

PATRICK WILSON
Er, actually, yeah, are you going to explain that thing at all?

MATTHEW GOODE
Who, Mr. Meowkins? He’s my pet.

PATRICK WILSON
Right. I figured that. But it’s kind of distracting, don’t you think you should at least explain–

MATTHEW GOODE
My evil plot? Certainly! You see, people are heading toward nuclear annihilation. What I’m doing is detonating energy bombs all over the world, which will look like the work of Billy Crudup. Then, rather than destroy each other, all of the nations of the world will unite after this tragedy, ushering in an era of world peace that will probably last five or six years.

PATRICK WILSON
You mean to tell me that you believe that if people thought that Billy Crudup, the very tool by which the United States exercised it’s power over other nations, were responsible for destroying cities all over the world, that the world’s response would be to join hands with us rather than unite to kill us for creating the problem that led to their demise?

MATTHEW GOODE
Ummm…

PATRICK WILSON
And you’re supposedly “the smartest man alive.” Smarter than the guy that can see time.

MATTHEW GOODE
Look, it’s better than the thing with the squid.

JACKIE EARLE HALEY
(growling)
Alright, you know what time it is?

MATTHEW GOODE
One minute to midnight on the cheesy doomsday clock symbol?

JACKIE EARLE HALEY
(growling)
No, time for a slow motion fight scene!
They all FIGHT in SLLLOOOOOOOWWWW MOOOTTTIIOONNN. THENSUDDENLYFASTMOTION! Then SLOOOOOOOOWWWWWW MOOOOTTIIIIOOONNNN AAAGGGAAIIIINNNN.

PATRICK WILSON
Can we hurry this along? I’m getting really sweaty in this thing and my costume is starting to smell like baked asshair.
Suddenly, BILLY and MALIN teleport onto the scene.

MATTHEW GOODE
Ah, Billy, glad you could join us. I was just telling the rest of the gang about how I’m framing you for murdering thousands.

BILLY CRUDUP
It doesn’t matter. Humans have the same number of particles whether living or dead.

MATTHEW GOODE
What? That’s not accurate at all. Think about that for a second. That’s like saying humans consist of the same number of particles whether full or starving.

BILLY CRUDUP
Either way, I don’t value human life, so do whatever you want.
(pause)
Actually, I value human life now. I can’t let you destroy so many lives.
(pause)
Upon further reflection, I value life, but I’m not going to stop your plan. I’ll just teleport out of here and go create some life myself.
(teleports)
*** GOD was telefragged by BILLY CRUDUP ***

CITIES all across the world are VAPORIZED. It’s DEPRESSING, just like the COMIC BOOK. The movie tries to end on a high note, but FAILS.

ZACK SNYDER
I did it! Alan Moore said Watchmen was “inherently unfilmable” but I pulled it off! Not so bad, was it Alan Moore?

ALAN MOORE
Film is an inferior form of art, spoon-feeding audience goers and watering down our collective cultural imagination. This movie was garbage, as are all movies.

ZACK SNYDER
Dude. You write comic books. Stop acting like you’re ****ing Monet, you pretentious jackass.
The RABID FANBOIS leave the theater and NOBODY ELSE WATCHES THE MOVIE.

END

:lmao:

Hurm. They are right. Unfortunately...
Still, great comic, great movie...
 
ok cool.

tl;dr funny watchmen
 
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About 50 sentences too long.
 
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Was wondering if anyone posted this. Almost as good as Zev's parodies. Almost.
 
I often like these but this one was kind of 'meh.'
 
Wow it was funny for a few lines. But it got old real fast. I do agree about Moore view point. He is an f-ing comic book writer.
 
i loved the movie and the comic book.

BUT that was hilarious. everyone needs to lighten up.
 

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