MydnightPhoenix
Lois Lane --> Leia Lane
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More changes I'd make:
1. Make it clear Lois knows Richard is not the father and that Richard knows he is not the biological father.
2. Jason's name is Dylan
3. Have the DP have a daycare on one of their floors and not have Dylan just hanging out at mommies work until late at nite.
And BTW Singer is Superman has been gone 5 yrs then his son is 4 and doesn't go to school and get report cards like a 3rd grader.
4. Change Superman's horrible suit! Those trunks were cut like low rise bikini bottoms!
5. Make Clark more like Cain and Cavill's Clark, not a clown or joke but a real man you would take seriously.
6. Keep Lois saving Superman from drowning
7. Keep Superman going to the hospital
8. Expand the world, SR was just about Metropolis ignoring 99.9% of the rest of the world.
9. Have Superman leave for a better reason than I heard from somebody who has a cousin who has a friend who said Krypton might still be around. Plus he stated he wouldn't leave again at the end of S2.
10. Make clear what the movie wants to be and what of the Donnerverse it is incorporating and ignoring. Did S3 and S4 never happen? Is this a remake of S:TM or a sequel to S2? When did Lois get pregnant the S2 hookup or some other time?
1. Make it clear Lois knows Richard is not the father and that Richard knows he is not the biological father.
2. Jason's name is Dylan
3. Have the DP have a daycare on one of their floors and not have Dylan just hanging out at mommies work until late at nite.
And BTW Singer is Superman has been gone 5 yrs then his son is 4 and doesn't go to school and get report cards like a 3rd grader.
4. Change Superman's horrible suit! Those trunks were cut like low rise bikini bottoms!
5. Make Clark more like Cain and Cavill's Clark, not a clown or joke but a real man you would take seriously.
6. Keep Lois saving Superman from drowning
7. Keep Superman going to the hospital
8. Expand the world, SR was just about Metropolis ignoring 99.9% of the rest of the world.
9. Have Superman leave for a better reason than I heard from somebody who has a cousin who has a friend who said Krypton might still be around. Plus he stated he wouldn't leave again at the end of S2.
10. Make clear what the movie wants to be and what of the Donnerverse it is incorporating and ignoring. Did S3 and S4 never happen? Is this a remake of S:TM or a sequel to S2? When did Lois get pregnant the S2 hookup or some other time?